For the last week we have been doing slides on our favorite Olympic people. I done dame Velirie Adams because my mum knows her my granpa knows her and my cozin Joseph tapine definitly knows her he is a rugby league player but he hasnt been to the olympics before but dame valerie adams has and yeah heres https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1WyBhgn3oDzFNsgJdxs1NT7dAvpgCOZ1RXsyuWOv_4Qs/edit#slide=id.ge6d16214a0_0_15
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Kia ora Isaiah,
ReplyDeleteWell done of publishing your work, but I know you could do better than this. Remember to use punctuation, and watch your spelling (particularly with peoples names).
Good work on the note taking slide. Your notes are concise and relevant. Maybe next time you could ensure all the work you post is your best work.